If you've read our version of the national anthem tell me what you think about it.
Wednesday 27 February 2019
🎵The New National Anthem!🎵 by Tristan
If you've read our version of the national anthem tell me what you think about it.
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Kia ora Room 12,
ReplyDeleteThis is really cool Tristen & Jessica. I like the way that only a few words have changed and it's still in the rhythm. How long did it take you to make it? Next time You could say more about how you made up the new words or add the music with it and people listening could sing along in there head or something. Overall great job.
Kind regards,
Kayla
Kia ora, I’m Aysha from Parkview Parua School.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading your version of our National Anthem, I found your version interesting and intriguing. Did you think about adding the thought process on how you came up with your lyrics? How long did it take for you to come up with your version of the National Anthem? Overall, I really liked your blog post.
Hi room 12/Tristan.
ReplyDeleteIm Ammalina from Parkview School in Christchurch.
I really like your new anthem.I dont know why but I like the fourth verse the best. Maybe you could of made a video of someone sing the new anthem. Did you know what all the words in the old anthem or did you have to search up the meaning in some of them?. Overall this is really good. It takes skill to writing songs and stuff.
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Bye bye
Ammalina.
Kia Ora I’m Logan from Parkview Parua School,
ReplyDeleteI really like your version of the National Anthem and think it is super cool. A few questions that I have about it are and how long did it take to make it, and will you make different versions of other national anthems or music? Maybe next time you could do a longer, more difficult song to change the lyrics of. I really enjoyed reading this and hope you do more stuff like this.
Goodbye from Logan.
Knonnichiwa Ruapotaka school!
ReplyDeletei'm Natalia, and i'm a year 7 at parkview parua!
i like the way you added emojis into your title to show straight away that the topic of the post is music.a also love the way you simplified the national anthem! it really helped my class understand the song better! this kinda me of when we had to simplify fractions for some reason. maybe next time you could do a longer, more difficult song to change the lyrics of. in conclusion, i really enjoyed reading this post. Kind regards~ Natalia
Kia ora, my name is Iszac, I am in Year 7 at Parkview Parua school. I liked the words you chose to rewrite our national anthem. You thought hard about what the words meant and how else they could be said. When did you do this activity?
ReplyDeletePlease checkout our class blog at http://parkviewparuakotuku.blogspot.com/
Kia ora ruapotaka school room 12 i am Paige a yr 7 from the kotoko team at parkview paura school. I really like the way yo added music notes in the title so it shows its music / rhyme i also love how you changed some words but not all and that you did the real one then the one you guys made up . maybe next time you could make it a little longer overall it was a really good poem
ReplyDeleteSincerely - paige
Kia ora Room 12,
ReplyDeleteThis is really cool Tristen & Jessica. I like the way that only a few words have changed and it's still in the rhythm. How long did it take you to make it? Next time you could say more about how you made up the new words and why you chose those words or add the music with it and people listening could sing. Well Done.
Cheers,
Alex