As I was watching TV I heard a buzz. Then lights went out. The television switched off automatically because there was a power outage. Suddenly, I heard weird banging noises coming from my balcony so I went upstairs, hopped into my bed and fell off to sleep.
We are Years 7 and 8 learners at Ruapotaka School in Auckland, New Zealand and our teacher is Mr Reid
Thursday 10 May 2018
A Huge Storm! by Liza
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2018,
A Country Like Mine,
New Zealand,
Storm
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Hi Liza,
ReplyDeleteI think that your piece of writing is amazing and that the adjectives you used were very specific to what had happened. I think that every sentence you wrote was perfectly written. Your writing is great and I don't think that there is anything you could fix about it.
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Hey Liza
ReplyDeleteI like your creative thinking. I really like your amazing adjectives. Your writing is awesome. Yes ! There is nothing wrong with your writing it's pretty amazing.
Keep your work up !
I could really picture that storm Liza.
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