On Tuesday I was watching the news. I saw that Auckland was going to be hit by a huge storm so I prepared myself. A few hours later there was an
enormous storm. I was
terrified because I thought that something could have happened. A tree could have fallen on my house or the roof might have flown off so I snuggled in a fluffy blanket to keep me warm and
relaxed.
As I was watching TV I heard a buzz. Then lights went out. The television switched off automatically because there was a power outage. Suddenly, I heard weird banging noises coming from my balcony so I went upstairs, hopped into my bed and fell off to sleep.
Hi Liza,
ReplyDeleteI think that your piece of writing is amazing and that the adjectives you used were very specific to what had happened. I think that every sentence you wrote was perfectly written. Your writing is great and I don't think that there is anything you could fix about it.
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Hey Liza
ReplyDeleteI like your creative thinking. I really like your amazing adjectives. Your writing is awesome. Yes ! There is nothing wrong with your writing it's pretty amazing.
Keep your work up !
I could really picture that storm Liza.
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